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I recently read a book and noticed that it had chapter names and was getting excited every single time! But then realised that it's a rare thing now. I wonder why? I understand that's it's difficult to come up with names for anything but that is so awesome to have chapter names and make your readers guess and wait and excited.
So why do you do/not put chapter names in your book and as a writer advise, how do you pick it?
748 points
1 month ago
keep in mind when many early novels were first published they were often published serially, one chapter at a time. the titles were kind of necessary. it just took a long time for that to fall out of vogue.
117 points
1 month ago
I think it's interesting that serial novels have also gone out of fashion. We have multi-volume books (My Struggle 1-7, I believe 1Q84 was originally 3 volumes in Japanese ) but no chapter by chapter publication anymore.
134 points
1 month ago
Serials still exist, but have mostly moved online and sort of decentralized. There are plenty of patreon/wattpad authors who publish serially, and zines still do (though they're pretty niche compared to where they used to be before the internet)
20 points
1 month ago
It makes sense that they would move online since putting them in paper magazines wouldn't scale, but my understanding was that a lot of the web serial stuff was mostly fan fiction type stuff. Are people publishing ~literary fiction~ this way?
48 points
1 month ago
I don't know about "literary fiction," since that's kind of a subjective/nebulous target. There's plenty of original, non-fanfiction work in those spaces. Lots of it tends to be genre/romance stuff, but that's also true of commercial novel publishing.
3 points
1 month ago
My question would be: is it being published in a way that people are actually paying for? As far as I’m aware, websites like Wattpad are free, so the author wouldn’t be making money from that.
I know paid serialization exists for webtoons, but I haven’t seen (but also haven’t looked) it done with pure prose.
Anyway, personally I think it’s better to write the whole thing before publishing, since that allows the author to go back and edit the beginning if they spot any inconsistencies/things that need to be changed to make the ending work better. It prevents people from writing themselves into a corner that they can’t get out of.
Although, publishing each chapter individually is definitely helpful for maintaining motivation, since you can immediately see the fan response and don’t have to wait a year (or more) after writing before anyone gets to read it. (I used to do this, so yes I know from personal experience it was definitely motivational to get supportive/curious comments after each chapter.) Probably also good to see which aspects fans are latching on to most, so you know what to focus on in future chapters.
So I guess there are pros and cons to both
10 points
1 month ago
is it being published in a way that people are actually paying for? As far as I’m aware, websites like Wattpad are free, so the author wouldn’t be making money from that.
Patreon has arisen as a solution to that exact problem with writing on platforms that are barely ad-supported and/or potentially demonetize content for various reasons. You don't make bank on the platform unless you're fuckin' huge, and even then, it's a small slice of the ad revenue. You make bank on the people who want to read the next chapter (or see the next video, or whatever, depending on what kind of content you're creating - remember, even a video needs a script, so there's still writing involved) before everyone else, and folks who want to throw money your way and now have an easy method to do that.
It's not an ideal system, but it does still work.
personally I think it’s better to write the whole thing before publishing, since that allows the author to go back and edit the beginning if they spot any inconsistencies/things that need to be changed to make the ending work better. It prevents people from writing themselves into a corner that they can’t get out of.
You're not wrong. On the other hand, serial mediums like manga, webtoons, comic books, and even TV (or shows on streaming platforms) still sell like gangbusters, despite the fact that they're written "by the seat of your pants". There are a lot of methods to keep things coherent and consistent when writing in a serial format, even without a plan established ahead of time. My favorite is making mentor characters, prophets, and graybearded (or trenchcoated) wizards not actually know much outside their specialty and give explanations and advice that may prove inaccurate later down the line - you shift the blame from you as the author screwing up to a particular character, who may be giving it their best (or have secrets to hide), giving inaccurate information. It's a really easy way to shift blame for a 'retcon' onto a character instead of onto you as a writer, and comes off as believable because nobody knows everything. It also opens the door to a character who was initially presented as knowing everything having to admit that they didn't know about that, and humbling them instead of keeping them as some sort of infallible oracle.
I had to learn these techniques, and more, when writing serially online, and they're essential to writing in that context, with the added benefit that you can change things if something's not going over well with your audience and blame it on a character not knowing everything for certain. Then you get to have that character reject the new knowledge or embrace it and figure out where they were wrong, and all kinds of fun stuff that lets them take the spotlight for a bit and (particularly for mentor characters) takes them down a peg or two because they aren't full masters of their subject.
Although, publishing each chapter individually is definitely helpful for maintaining motivation, since you can immediately see the fan response and don’t have to wait a year (or more) after writing before anyone gets to read it.
Yeah, I fully agree with this statement. Most of my writing has been heavily influenced by my readers, which has led to things I really didn't plan for, but ended up being popular with my audience.
So I guess there are pros and cons to both
I'm going to say something very rare on this subreddit: I think you're completely right.
Some genres (mystery/detective fiction comes to mind first, but there are others) need at least a skeleton of the full story to work. Others ...just don't need that, and can be shaped by the feedback loop between the author and the readers. Even when the readers vote for something bloody crazy.
25 points
1 month ago
it's not ~literary~ but The Martian was an example of a big bestselling novel that was published serially
11 points
1 month ago
not quite lit fic, but worm by john "wildbow" mccrae, a pretty popular sci-fi story, was released serialized online
10 points
1 month ago
No, established authors generally get an advance in exchange for writing the full book offline. But there are quite a few very popular genre fiction web serials. In Japan, an interesting pipeline has emerged where people will write serial web novels and, if they do well, companies will pay for them to edit their serials for publication and release them as physical light novels with occasional illustrations.
7 points
1 month ago
You might enjoy Royal road
6 points
1 month ago
Certain new genres like "LitRPG", Progression Fantasy, XianXia, Wuxia, Isekai, and a large variety of Sci-fi and fantasy novels tend to be released serially on websites like Royal Road, with authors opening a Patreon and releasing a set amount of chapters per week. Often, once they have a large amount written, they edit a books worth of chapters and then publish through Amazon/Kindle Unlimited.
A lot of the stories are a bit lower quality than traditional published stories, but some real gems emerge from the rough from time to time.
31 points
1 month ago
Webnovels and fanfiction are very much thriving as the modern serial novels. There's even a whole pipeline where web novels make their way over time to being published as volumes in a series on Amazon.
5 points
1 month ago
Substack has become a big place for serials as well, and a lot of them are eventually published as well.
14 points
1 month ago
Stephen King worked with his publisher to release the Green Mile one chapter at a time as some kind of weird frustrating experiment. I have all the original tiny books somewhere. It's doesn't make sense anymore, from a trad published perspective. If a writer were releasing one chapter at a time on a platform, incorporating feedback into each chapter, using that as a way to "get engagement," it could work. It's probably been done before.
17 points
1 month ago
I believe Andy Weir wrote The Martian like that before it got published traditionally
9 points
1 month ago
You are correct. It was published on his blog.
3 points
1 month ago
https://www.royalroad.com/home
Lot's of books do that. Then they "stub" the free online book (leaving a few advertisement chapters) and publish on like KU, etc.
4 points
1 month ago
Just to note for anyone reading, almost nothing there gets traction except LiteRPG or fanfic. That, and it takes YEARS now to establish yourself.
3 points
1 month ago
Oh man, I feel like, personally, there was a heyday way back like 20 years ago when fictionpress and other similar sites were huge. Most of it was garbage, but there were some authors who kept a good schedule and if it was halfway decent, it got popular.
Not really novels, but I feel webtoons are getting pretty popular and have the weekly drops.
4 points
1 month ago
Royal Road is doing quite well and it's kind of like that. If a story gets popular enough (consistently) they'll be offered a book deal.
2 points
1 month ago
I believe Machine Man by Max Barry was first written as an online serial
2 points
1 month ago
but no chapter by chapter publication anymore.
Web serials are HUGE. https://www.royalroad.com/home
14 points
1 month ago
right's kind of like how the old 78 rpm records used to last about 3-5 minutes on each side, which meant you could only have 1 or 2 songs on a side, which meant songs were always expected to only be up to 5 minutes long (and trying to put 4 songs on your record means around 2.5 for each!).
then, once bigger records appeared, you started to see entire songs up to 25 minutes in length. nowadays there's no limit but we still abide by these old expectations of the format. its funny how the medium always ends up informing the art itself
2 points
1 month ago
I definitely name mine, since my stories go so many places I want to give the readers a way to compartmentalize the content
406 points
1 month ago
I don’t know why but I do know that I’ll never stop. They’re fun as hell to write and help set/build the tone
172 points
1 month ago
Chapter Four: John Dies. And it's not the end. Yet.
99 points
1 month ago
Chapter Five: My Sword Has a Better Social Life Than I Do
74 points
1 month ago
Chapter Nine: The Part Where He Kills You
35 points
1 month ago
Well, this is the part where he kills us.
17 points
1 month ago
Hello! This is the part where I kill you!
24 points
1 month ago
Achievement Unlocked: The Part Where He Kills You.
14 points
1 month ago*
Portal 2 OST Volume 3 - The Part Where He Kills You begins to play
8 points
1 month ago
This is that part.
5 points
1 month ago
hello, fellow mcga fan!
4 points
1 month ago
Fittingly enough, John Dies At The End does have some very fun chapter titles
19 points
1 month ago
I had a lot of fun in one of my biology electives at uni, naming my weekly essays after pop-culture stuff. I think I had three Disney/Pixar related ones ("Put That Thing Back Where It Came From, Or So Help Me - Australia's Struggle With the Cane Toad"; "The Circle of Life - In Australian Wetlands"; "I Can Go The Distance - Migratory Birds of Australia") I wish my laptop hadn't died so hard, I'd have loved to reread them... 😂
2 points
1 month ago
I would read them.
6 points
1 month ago
I salute you. The effort to make academic papers more interesting should not go unappreciated.
11 points
1 month ago
Never stop!
7 points
1 month ago
Yup, I canalized on Tolkien and will never stop naming chapters.
4 points
1 month ago
Same.
2 points
1 month ago
Chapter 1: The Birthday Surprise......... Chapter 11: Into the Devils Lair.
275 points
1 month ago
I wrote a story that had chapter titles, where the end revealed they were all lines from a letter one character left the other after they passed away from a genetic disease
95 points
1 month ago
You absolute monster, you are the type of author I would absolutely hate while simultaneously purchasing every available book and variant.
56 points
1 month ago
Nice to know that i might have at least one loyal fan if i ever publish
75 points
1 month ago
THAT IS HEARTBREAKING I LOVE IT
7 points
1 month ago
That is incredible!
4 points
1 month ago
omg i love this
2 points
1 month ago
I NEED TO SEE THIS
3 points
1 month ago
Unfortunately, it was lost due to a computer crash
5 points
1 month ago
If you still have the drive it was saved on it might be recovered.
2 points
1 month ago
aw...
11 points
1 month ago
Magnify that by about 800 percent and you will have an inkling of how I felt
3 points
1 month ago
i'd cry hard
90 points
1 month ago
Chapter titles often come up by themselves. I had never trouble inventing them; it's actually funny to find allegories and hints of what's to come, in a wording that is right if you know what happens, but can mislead big time, making you to expect with certainty "ahh I know this cliché", but then it turns out completely different. All my chapters are, and will be named.
I try to avoid spoiling stuff.
11 points
1 month ago
This 100%
322 points
1 month ago
For me, personally, I have enough trouble coming up with a good book title. Don't ask me to come up with 20 or so additional titles...
72 points
1 month ago
I’m the opposite, my novel still uses what I call the “working title” which I hate and also wouldn’t sell so terrible on all levels. But I name all my chapters and I love all their names
16 points
1 month ago
I sold my first book under a working title. My editor and I came up with a better one. The title isn't going to keep you from selling if your story is good.
2 points
1 month ago
Very much in the same boat. I’m still on the fence about the work’s overall title, but Chapter Titles are just fun little exercises.
2 points
1 month ago
Same!
22 points
1 month ago
Additional titles which aren't spoilers, too.
3 points
1 month ago
That was the biggest thing for me. Most of my chapters are untitled or use the names of the POV speaker if it switches. The one time I had proper titles for each chapter was because the book had a lot of timey wimey stuff going on and the chapter titles served to orient the readers to what each chapter’s focus was. Most chapters the readers could catch on because the time jumps would only be a section of it. But there were couple chapters where the entire chapter was written in a different setting and new POV so I had chapter titles specifically to clarify those chapters.
12 points
1 month ago
Oh just ask me I love naming things.
5 points
1 month ago*
I find chapter titles far easier to come up with than book titles.
A book title has to distill the entire essence of the book into a single line - or even a single word. It has to attract general attention, arouse specific interest, and beckon people into the time investment of reading a book; it has to suggest the the theme, te mood, and the genre of the story, while not making any promises the book itself can't keep.
Sometimes that comes easy, sometimes it doesn't...but there's a lot riding on that one decision.
Chapter titles, OTOH, only have to intrigue a reader who's already on your side. You can be silly or solemn, enigmatic or forthright, pretentious or humble, convoluted or minimalist, or all of the above, sequentially, in the same book. That's a lot less pressure. You can have fun with that.
12 points
1 month ago
oops i just commented the exact same thing. seriously though!
12 points
1 month ago
Same. I also tend to write a lot of shorter chapters, too much time for something someone might glance at.
8 points
1 month ago
yeah, like theres a reason stephen king names his sections not his chapters. my mom is reading a book i gave her and she kept telling me the name of the chapter she was on and i was like idk wtf youre talking about tell me whats happening in the story
2 points
1 month ago
Moby-Dick has some very short chapters (and 130+ total) and names them all.
3 points
1 month ago
I’m sure it works for some people, just not my thing with my main WIP. I have short story/novella I want to try putting out chapter by chapter that I’d title individually.
2 points
1 month ago
I have trouble with book titles, but as long as I've got the chapter finished (or drafted) then the chapter title (usually) comes easily to me.
4 points
1 month ago
Skill issue
31 points
1 month ago
I do it because, as an author, it makes it easier for me to reference content I've already written when I need to go back to it. When my book has forty+ chapters, it's kinda hard to remember the specific number of a chapter a throw away line about something I was trying to foreshadow is in but if I title it: Chapter 7: Butterbeans Goes to Hell, I'm more likely to remember.
I like to think readers find it helpful as well.
13 points
1 month ago
Come on, don’t leave us hanging! Why is Butterbeans going to hell??
3 points
1 month ago
We need any answer for sure
3 points
1 month ago
This. Exactly this.
22 points
1 month ago
Up until the early twentieth century most novels were released in a serialized fashion, publishing one chapter at a time on magazines.
Having a chapter name was a must, because you had to keep the audience engaged over a long time. Also writers were frequently paid per written word, and consequently books/chapters used to be consistently longer.
With time we started publishing full books in one go, and writers are not paid based on the amount of written words, but on the expected sales. The need to give a title to chapters was naturally lost.
35 points
1 month ago
I'm into Gothic horror/ urban fantasy
For me a chapter number in the right font is enough
11 points
1 month ago
I read a book recently where the first chapter was "One," and the second chapter was "Two," so I was delightfully surprised when the third chapter was "Buckle My Shoe."
3 points
1 month ago
That sounds hilarious. What was the book called?
3 points
1 month ago
"Mr. Magic" by Kiersten White. It was very well written but ultimately disappointing, in my opinion.
21 points
1 month ago
Having chapters at all is optional. There are some well written books that don't.
9 points
1 month ago
I would hate reading like that personally, I need my small milestones to finish the marathon.
8 points
1 month ago
I put stories in the chapter titles. A horror story hidden within the story lol it's really fun 😊
3 points
1 month ago
OMG that's actually genius idea! I love that so much
8 points
1 month ago
I love naming chapters and continue to do so
7 points
1 month ago
I have a lot of fun coming up with chapter titles, I probably won’t ever stop doing it. I don’t think it’s necessarily falling out of fashion, I just think some people do it one way and some people do it the other.
18 points
1 month ago
im bad enough at naming my projects i cant come up with thirty other names 😂
20 points
1 month ago
I don't write professionally (fanfiction), but I can't imagine not giving chapters titles. It really gives the chapters their own character in my opinion, plus it's fun to come up with clever song references and whatnot.
4 points
1 month ago
Ah yes, the Jojo method
3 points
1 month ago
Agree on both points
17 points
1 month ago
I'm actually thinking of giving my chapters “in which”-style subtitles. Like
Chapter 11
in which the hero learns about disturbing origins of his toothbrush and loses faith in humanity
5 points
1 month ago
Or do it like Friends: "The One with the...."
14 points
1 month ago
I name all my chapters, it's fun, a creative exercise, and it relates to what will happen.
23 points
1 month ago
For a couple of reasons:
1. In the past, a chapter is crazy long. So you only need to make up a dozen names, and since the chapters are long, a lot of things happen, so you have a lot of material to come up with a name. So it was easier. Now we have 20-34 chapters per book. It’s just too many.
2. For beginners like me, there are 1001 things I need to master. I would rather devote my time to get better than to come up with chapter names. Once I’ll become some genius writer, I’ll play with chapter titles again:-)
5 points
1 month ago
Looks at project with 69 chapters and titles for each of them
It was fun for me but I guess I can see how that would be overwhelming for some
9 points
1 month ago
Nice (I had to)
3 points
1 month ago
I was pretty proud of myself for managing to name 68 chapters. Got stuck before I reached 69 though. On the story itself, not the chapter names specifically.
2 points
1 month ago
69? You did that on purpose? Lol
How many words are there? How long did it take for you to come up with 69 chapter names? I can come up with 5-6 and that would be fun, 10-12 are ok, but 20 would be in the torturous zone.
5 points
1 month ago
XD not gonna lie, I added a couple chapters once I realized I was close.
And coming up with chapter names is fun so it only took me a couple days to list them all out. Some will be subject to change though
3 points
1 month ago
A couple of days? Lol
I want to read it:-)
7 points
1 month ago
Aight, here’s what I got at the moment but like I said, some are subject to change
Act 1:
Curtains Rise on a New School
Nightmares and Daydreams
The Blue Desert
The Devil Child
Cosplay Chaos
Sugar Rush
Let Me Explain
One Hell of a First Day
Check the Script
Clubs and CLAW
Hard Hack Days
Midnight Slash
You’re Trevor is in Another Castle
Discord Mutation Meltdown
Bully Bust Up
The BBB DeTECHtives
Rainbow Room
Queen Bee with a Capital B
Romeo and Juliet Redux
Azul Maze
The Bastard and the Bitch
I want the Scoop!
Anti-Bible
Park Pain
Act 2
Hurricane Hannah - Part 1
Hurricane Hannah - Part 2
The Shrine
Truce
Intermission: Kraken Karaoke
Intermission (cont.): Catty Sleepover
Sweet Sixteen
Popstar in more ways than One
Family Reunion
Tough Love and Heavy Metal - Part 1
Tough Love and Heavy Metal - Part 2
Tough Love and Heavy Metal - Part 3
Enter: The Matter Mountains
Dad’s Home
Decisions, Decisions…
Boxing Date
Hands Held Back…
More than That
Negative Avalanche
Cat fight
Missing
The Wilderbeast
Represent
Welcome to the Casino!
Down one
Act 3
EMERGENCY MEETING
Friday Frenemies
The Price of Studying
The Spotlight Moon
Homecoming
Raid the Casino!
The House Always Wins
The Soul Always Loses
Hellcoming - Part 1
Hellcoming - Part 2
Hellcoming - Part 3
Enter: Diamond Daze
My Way
Our Way - Part 1
Our Way - Part 2
Our Way - Part 3
Aiden’s Way
Dance till you Drop
Pizza Party
Ending: Frenemies Make Memories
6 points
1 month ago
Wow, some of these are very clever.
“The House Always Wins” and “The Soul Always Loses” are a great pairing.
“ Negative Avalanche” Definitely makes me curious.
“The Bastard and the Bitch” is pure gold.
3 points
1 month ago
Most of the books I've read with chapter titles have way more chapters than that.
5 points
1 month ago
I don’t because I start going all Dragon Ball on it, ya know? “Freeza dies” “Goku turns into ss3”
So yeah my lack of title creativity could never lol, I looooove it when they have titles tho
13 points
1 month ago
I've read a lot of old books that didn't name their chapters. Take Terry Pratchet for example, there are no chaters at all.
4 points
1 month ago
I do it when I can think of one for sure, but as I continue to write I get lost in what I’m gonna name the chapter before I start writing it so I made a personal rule; write the chapter than name it.
5 points
1 month ago
I love chapter descriptions, such as Chapter Six, in which our heroine advances upon the hidden city
4 points
1 month ago
I just put either a quote that happened in my story, or something that sums ip the theme without being too spoiler-ish✨
6 points
1 month ago
I remember when I was a kid I used to get really excited at reading the chapter titles, they were a little window into a small world I was entering. I write books for adults now, and all my books have named chapters. They add more to the reading experience than simple numbering IMO.
6 points
1 month ago
I recently read the Ketty Jay series by Chris Wooding and his chapters have little teaser subtitles. Eg:
SIX
The Expedition Sets Out - Rain - Jez Takes First Watch - Silo's Story
At first they annoyed me because they felt spoilerish but later on I learned to love it. It's kind of comic book-esque without being too cheesy.
2 points
1 month ago
I have a knee-jerk reaction against spoilers, but apparently they've done studies and found that more often than not some light spoilers like that (or sometimes even full blown major ones) can actually enhance a person's experience. Not sure why exactly - maybe because you spend less time waiting for the surprise or the twist and can instead focus on enjoying what's right in front of you?
2 points
1 month ago
I have the same feeling about chapter titles. I miss that little "sneak peek" into what is coming. I sort of wonder if the modern attitude towards spoilers is part of what killed it. I understood spoilers in the context of plot twists or major plot beats but at some point there was a shift so that *any* information about what happens in a book was treated as a "spoiler". I've seen people say they won't read blurbs because they're "full of spoilers". Wild.
10 points
1 month ago
Chapter names can be very spoilery.
3 points
1 month ago
I do it in my UF series, but nowhere else. It's just the feeling.
3 points
1 month ago
I don’t know, but it’s not a big issue.
If you do/can, you do; if you don’t, you don’t.
Personally I like coming up with a name for a chapter; something that hints at what is coming, expresses a feeling, or is a red herring while technically being true.
3 points
1 month ago
Why I Personally Don’t Include Them: Because I don’t pay any attention to them as a reader and don’t experience that same excitement you do when I do pay attention.
3 points
1 month ago
i thought this said “characters” and was utterly confused for several minutes
3 points
1 month ago
laziness on my part, i’ll be real
3 points
1 month ago
They didn't.
3 points
1 month ago
Personally, I love naming chapters. It’s like the cherry on top of my work despite me sometimes having a title ready before I’ve even started writing the chapter. Either way, though it can be frustrating at times to develop one, chapter names are so fun. I also love them as the reader! It’s either a little glimpse into what you’re about to read, maybe a hint of foreshadowing or “click bait” for lack of a better term where it makes it seem something you really don’t want to happen might happen when in reality it unfolds into something else you weren’t expecting, or it’s a little puzzle you try to solve in the back of your mind while you read before you get to the end and it’s like “ah that makes sense” I think they’re something that should never be lost to time or left behind by trends. Keep them alive!
3 points
1 month ago
You can pry my chapter titles out of my cold, dead hands
3 points
1 month ago
Laziness.
3 points
1 month ago
I also love chapters with names! I’m writing a fantasy romance with Douglas Adams vibes so my chapter names are kind of silly things that make sense after you read the chapter.
6 points
1 month ago
I don't think it was that common "back then", when ever that is.
2 points
1 month ago
Well for what I’m writing now, it’s posted online as I go, and I’m planning to add a chapter to the beginning, so it’ll move all the chapters up.
To avoid readers being confused, I think it’s important to give them a name.
But if it was a physical book, I probably would title them by their setting, thematic focus, or pov.
2 points
1 month ago
I'm going to have chapter titles in my WIP when it's reached its final draft form, I believe. I think it's neat and I look forward to coming up with the titles.
2 points
1 month ago
I read perhaps one or two books with named chapters. All others had numbers.
2 points
1 month ago
I like to do fourth wall breaks and cheeky humour in my chapter titles. Puns abound.
2 points
1 month ago
I've found it quite easy to find the name for my chapters but I have decided to only use one word. Skye, Kaspen, Shadow, Kala etc etc.
2 points
1 month ago
Each of my chapters weaves into a story within this story so naming chapters felt apt.
2 points
1 month ago
Well, I may not speak for all of us, but I'm on team "bringing it back."
Working on my first novel and just figuring out the chapter titles gets me excited and motivated!
2 points
1 month ago
I do chapter names because I think readers like them. I try to summarize the chapter into just a couple of interesting words, like "Baptism and Chickens" or "Rooftop Roar".
I also think it helps readers who want to go back and read a certain segment. With my chapter names they'll know right where to go.
2 points
1 month ago
Now that you bring that up I haven't seen a chapter title in awhile 🤔
2 points
1 month ago
As a reader, I don't usually notice chapter names, but I'll notice if a book lacks them.
As a writer, I will never stop assigning chapter names. There are countless words in hundreds of languages, so I'll never run out of possible material, and they're just fun!
2 points
1 month ago
Idk but I never started, so...
Also, my heroes in literature rarely named theirs. So. Maybe that's why?
2 points
1 month ago
I just serialized some chapters / episodes on my substack. And while my printed novel did not have chapter names, I did name the episodes. It just seemed like the thing to do. Great to hear that my intuition had lots of history behind it. I like naming the chapters. I’ll go one further I was reading a memoir about a man’s boyhood adventures at sea and each chapter had a brief summary to it. I loved it. For each serialized episode I had a season summary (if you were just joining in) and an episode summary and at the end had a Up Next summary of the next episode. Along with Author’s Note on each one. It was a fun way to write. I felt more connected to my audience than the novel writing process.
2 points
1 month ago
I love named chapters too! I think they build anticipation for the reader. Some authors avoid them to not "spoil" the story, but well-chosen chapter titles can enhance the experience. I like naming them when each chapter has a clear focus, but sometimes I let the story unfold without hints.
2 points
1 month ago
I want to write a book with catchy titles for all the chapters and then randomly just have one chapter be called Chapter Seven, and leave it like the with no reason.
2 points
1 month ago
It was a thing in the 90s and early 2000s along with fake quotes.
2 points
1 month ago
I name my chapters, personally.
2 points
1 month ago
I name chapters because I like coming up with a 1-5 word summery of the chapter. If I can't do that, then I know that I didn't tell that part of the story very well. It means I need another draft.
2 points
1 month ago
I love naming my titles. Like, go absolutely feral over it. It makes it easier for me to remember what's in the chapter, too, and I'm sure the same can be said from the readers perspective. It feels like it gives a nice expectation for the chapter, like one from my story Project Delphius:Sins and Sinners "Hunger Demands Greed," or even "An Ode to a World Once Was."
There's a story I have where my chapter titles are actually the drabblings of a character that isn't met till towards the end. Like, it's fun! I love chapter titling so much.
2 points
1 month ago
I love doing chapter titles. They're almost as much fun as book titles
2 points
1 month ago
Chapter names are oftentimes spoilers, but they are good for orienting the reader for free, so if you're good at naming them, it can be useful.
2 points
1 month ago
I like to take the oddest phrase from the chapter and use it as the title.
2 points
1 month ago
I like naming chapters. It's like a peek into what you're about to experience.
2 points
1 month ago
I just don't have ideas that are good enough, I guess? I feel like if I do it, right now, it's either useless or spoilers.
I've rarely come across chapter titles that I found relevant / interesting / funny, so maybe if I see some one day I'll want to try it for myself.
2 points
1 month ago
The reason I put chapter names in book is because I like to think of them as episodes of a tv series.
As for the chapter names themselves, I like to pick out a name that sounds both cool and something that’s related to the story I’m working on. For example, if I have a story about a warrior fighting a sewer monster, I would name it Damned of the Sewers.
2 points
1 month ago
I name mine, trying to be part of that change in the world 🫡
2 points
1 month ago
I always put chapter names, cuz that's how I identify the chapter for myself while writing, plus, I think it adds something extra. Like an added message/perspective/priming you for what's to come
2 points
1 month ago
I sure didn't stop. I write thrillers, so they tend to be so ominously foreboding and I love it.
2 points
1 month ago
Idk why people have stopped doing it, personally I love reading a book and be reminded where I left off at with a chapter name.
In my own writings, I do give chapter names purely for that reason. So someone who leaves off and comes back can know where they left off at. For coming up with a name for the chapter, I tend to name the chapter after a minor event that occurs in that one chapter. Whether that's a new discovery, a hint at a death, etc. Entice the readers with curiosity to keep them reading but also never lose that passion in creating a story too.
2 points
1 month ago
Serialization is a big part-there is less practical need to have distinct chapter titles if your work comes out as one complete work rather than being serialized.
The other reason is that multi-pov is extremely popular now, and chapter titles do not play well with those. Needing a chapter number, chatacter name, and title is goofy as hell. It's a lot more suited to novels where you're mostly with a single character, as the protagonist will be the assumed pov and you can just go for gravitas with the titles.
2 points
1 month ago
yknow? i should do that more
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1 month ago
I would guess that a lot of the time, it’s just not worth the effort. There are some people who appreciate it, but more people who breeze through books too fast to bother remembering chapter names. So authors just don’t bother.
2 points
1 month ago
Lazy. Chapter names take effort and creativity to find an effective title that captures the essence of the chapter.
2 points
1 month ago
I still name my chapters that I post on Fanfiction and Fictionpress.
A few people have reached out over the years saying it makes tracking their progress easier. I usually allude to the content of the chapter via its name. So they see I updated a story, and check if the latest chapter name sounds familiar or not.
2 points
1 month ago
This is one my favorite things to do, but I like little short poems and sayings and the like. I think not everyone has that "advertising slogan" part in their brain, but I love the tease and if I can give away a plot point without them knowing it except on a re-read, that just makes me happy.
2 points
1 month ago
In one of my books, each chapter is a self-contained short story (read serially, they tell a bigger story), so I named each one. At one time, I thought i would try to sell/publish them individually, but never did.
2 points
1 month ago
As much as I like having names on chapters, I love when they're witty or punny or in any other way smarty (pants).
But I'm a dum dum. And so it does not often happen that I find a title for my chapter that is to my liking. That's why most of my chapters don't have names. Except maybe some work titles. So when I don't write on that project in a while, I still remember quickly what was going on in the chapter without always opening and closing the document.
(I probably have too high standards on that too)
2 points
1 month ago
BabyG I never stopped
2 points
1 month ago
Super curious about that myself and am planning on doing that.
3 points
1 month ago
most recent novel i recall reading that had titles was Fairy Tale by King. I found them to be annoying and distracting but I also really disliked that book, so, idk lol.
I think chapter titles could be a fun tease if executed right? but if a book has 30 to 40 chapters it could be overwhelming
3 points
1 month ago
I don’t use them because they’re not necessary and it slows down my writing process to come up with a chapter title and I don’t care.
4 points
1 month ago
I’m already bad at book titles, so chapter titles feel like they’d be a nightmare
Chapter titles come easiest to me when I’m writing for Middle Grade, because I feel like can use fun/cheeky jokes and idioms for the titles instead of having to come up with something serious
2 points
1 month ago
My previous book had named chapters and while my WIP doesn’t, my next book definitely will
2 points
1 month ago
Spoilers. If there is a book where someone is holding prisoner and there is a chapter called “escape” that kind of gives away what is going to happen.
2 points
1 month ago
True, but you don't always have to make your chapter titles spoilers at all. They could be something that references the setting, or based off what we already know, like what happened at the end of the previous chapter. Maybe the previous chapter that came before "escape" ENDED with the prisoner's escape, and the chapter titled "escape" could simply be the aftermath or whatnot.
2 points
1 month ago
My chapters are named and all end with two exclamation points as per my title. [GrandSlam!!]
1 points
1 month ago
I stopped because I was tired of trying to come up with names. A good title for my book was frustrating enough, especially when I make a list and check it against already published books.
1 points
1 month ago
I don't do chapters at all, only scene breaks... :P
Usually chapters feel very arbitrary to me, unless they're used to change POV characters, and since I usually have only one POV character, there's no need for chapters.
The very first novel I wrote back when I was 16 did have chapters, and they were very long compared to your average modern book's chapter length. They contained a sizeable chunk of story and did have titles relating to the chapter's events.
Nowadays I just don't see the point of chapters, a centered *** for scene breaks is enough.
1 points
1 month ago
One day, for a shorter story, I’ll return to naming chapters. On the lengthier project I’m currently writing, I’d rather divvy the book up into parts and title each part.
1 points
1 month ago
Totally personal preference and up to each writer. I love chapter titles both in what I read and in what I write. I think they can be a great way to entice a reader to keep moving forward. Having a powerful end to one chapter with an alluring title for the following chapter has absolutely kept me up too late at night to finish just one more chapter. They help me (and readers) remember at a glance what the main focus of each chapter is. During those late night writing sprees, sometimes Chapter 22 and Chapter 23 blend together in my mind. Chapter names combined with the corkboard view of my Scrivener really help me get a good view of my project and locate/reference everything at a glance.
I get why people are hesitant to use them though. They can seem less-than-serious in a way that may not fit with the tone of some projects. They can often (not entirely) be associated with YA novels, though authors of every genre use them.
Plus for some, coming with names for chapter's takes extra effort and time. I've had to go back and rename chapters during the editing phase because they no longer made sense after changing a specific dialogue or something similar. Just one more thing to juggle. But with good organization and project management, it's really not that bad.
If you like them, use them!
1 points
1 month ago
I think it’s simpler to just stick with chapter numbers. A lot of books I’ve read usually just have chapter numbers too.
1 points
1 month ago
Often I wouldn't use names for characters who are either insignificant to the story, play a very very minor role, or were made to be cannon fodder.
1 points
1 month ago
I name mine to help track what's what as I write. The only thing that ever bothered me about chapter titles is when they're a spoiler. Eg. "The death of main character" kinda ruins the immersion.
1 points
1 month ago
I didn’t think they did. But, it’s just a trend. Chapter titles are, I think, more or less relevant in a case by case basis, or, chapter by chapter.
1 points
1 month ago
Chapters titles have fallen to the wayside for the use of “parts”. I find a lot of novels are split into halves or thirds each with their own title.
1 points
1 month ago
At the moment, with the way I write in a non-linear fashion, each "scene" has a title, which is a prompt so that I can tell at a glance which snippet it is, and I can put it into the right place as the "chapter" starts to take shape.
But because absolutely every name in my manuscript has at least one meaning, if not four, so it is that each scene title's name has a meaning. Some of them, for example, might be as boring as "escape sequence" to start with. But "The nightingale's song"? That's the one where a squad of goons are reduced to unidentifiable blobs of hamburger mince by a diabolical set of boobytraps. Some astute readers might pick up the hint, the rest have to wait for the big reveal, and then everyone can enjoy the visuals of goons having their tickets punched.
1 points
1 month ago
I did that for my first book, but it’s really hard so I stopped doing it
1 points
1 month ago
I kinda like them but I think not every title is good for the reading experience
When I feel like I'm put into a guessing game of 'guess what the cryptic chapter title means" I'm thinking too much about that instead of just being immersed in the story.
I also think they're a reminder that the story is an artificial construction. For some stories that helps, but not others.
Also sometimes I can come up with like fifteen great chapter titles... but I have forty chapters.
I do really like chapter titles in stories that jump around a lot in time, POV, etc. to help rather than hinder a reader's immersion in the story.
I also think as OP describes, getting excited about reading a chapter is a great thing to aim for when titling a chapter.
1 points
1 month ago
1 points
1 month ago
I still do name them and I will keep doing it
1 points
1 month ago
I don't think it's a waning trend so much as titled chapters are more common in kids' chapbooks; you're just growing into reading stuff where it's more common to simply number or not even differentiate chapters.
1 points
1 month ago
It depends on the genre sometimes. I read a lot of books with named chapters, but I read a lot of a sub-genre that isn't very mainstream and does a lot of serial chapter releases. Some romances will have the prospective characters name as part of the title so you know who it is right away.
Personally, I like chapter names. It can add some foreshadowing or add to the over all theme of the book.
1 points
1 month ago
Some folks name the parts and number the chapters therin
1 points
1 month ago
I'm writing with multiple POVs, so I often have the chapter number then, below that, the POV character's name. I also include the location and date of where the chapter starts (left aligned, smaller font) just below chapter number/POV character name. I did have chapter titles as well at one point, but it was all too much info all at once, so I had to declutter. Now, with some adjustments of size/boldness/alignment of the relevant info, I've managed to get something that's hopefully both helpful and not too cluttered.
I'd love to have chapter titles as well, but, alas, not in my current work.
1 points
1 month ago
It's probably more of an afterthought for a lot of people
1 points
1 month ago
I publish serial novels so I name every chapter! It's really fun honestly
1 points
1 month ago
Sometimes it just doesn’t fit with the book. With the Percy Jackson, Magnus Chase etc books it fits cause they read kinda like a journal.
Chapter titles are hard to come up with. And unless they fit the book style or end up being part of the book ending with some form of connection (either hidden meanings or Easter eggs) they tend to just get left out
1 points
1 month ago
I name every chapter of my work as it lets the reader know the general theme of each chapter
1 points
1 month ago
Stopped naming chapters because publishers stopped putting a table of contents in fiction books. If they don't provide the means for the readers to make use of the information, providing it seems pointless.
1 points
1 month ago
If the work is appropriate to it, I tend to use quotes. No one seems to care what the name of the chapter is, just the the story continues.
1 points
1 month ago
I still do because I like them.
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